So, Chris is geeking out with geeky things beside me and I just got a notification that my tutor has marked my first assignment. Yey! I got 58%, which sounds absobloominlutely pants, but I can assure you 55-69% is a Clear Pass - or a Pass 3 University Scale score - as it says so in the course materials (Assignments Booklet 2007, p. 5).
Need to work on my referencing, in fact actually using some would be a start. What I also must do is “refer to evidence - research, commentary, studies or stats” (Drury, 2007 p.1). Apparently my structure is developing well, and now I need to look at “the sharp and precise focus of individual paragraphs” (Drury, 2007 p.1).
What I found hardest was actually getting a point across in very few words. 750 words is a page worth of writing - not much when you need an opening/introductory paragraph and a 100 word summary to close with your arguments and especially when you have so many ideas or points that you want to raise.
Basically, I need to stick to the material and use references from the sources within and make sure that I reference and acknowledge all of their respective works.
Onwards and upwards.
~ Nikki ~
References:-
Assignments Booklet 2007, The Open University, UK
Drury, S. (2007) ‘DD121 TMA01 tutor report for Nikki Halligan Introductory Chapter: Outline The View That Contemporary Society Is Both Fascinated by and Frightened Of Crime, The Open University, UK